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One day, I found a piece of the night sky. So, I bundled it up to make a cloak. I was wreathed in stars, spun from the very beginning of the Universe itself, locked in a cycle from before the beginning until after the end.

It's thread was thinner than a spider's web strand, but thicker then love. It was just wide enough for eternity, and slightly less long than infinity. It was a bit too big for me, no matter how I grew. But that was okay, since I liked layering the swaths of fabric against my skin. It had a hood that didn't like the light very much. It was deep enough so that all one could see of my face might have been my mouth, but that didn't matter too much because I would know if I was about to bump into something. It would move as I did, unrestricted and bound at the same time.

When it moved, it whispered of worlds beyond the beyond, past our sight and to the first left or right. It whispered of star's light and holes so large that even bright beams of light would get trapped inside. It spoke of things that always were and always will be, or perhaps of things that have just been around for longer than I. It whispered of fate to the listening ear, and of destiny inbetween. It would speak of dying ashes reborn into glorious beings, rising up again from the old ones remains.

But it was never meant to stay with me forever. In between one travel and the next between a world much like this one and another a bit like the rings of Jupiter, it fell off of my thin frame. And it disappeared into the vast sky from whence it came. I turned back only once, and tried my best to make my eyes spot it, but it was long gone. It was only meant to stay just long enough to always carry a piece of the sky in my heart.

And so, here I am now, a child with a piece of the sky lodged in-between the blood and walls of my heart, looking upwards.
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This is for a certain someone, to whom I want my words to all be woven like cloaks of stars.

For :iconxpaperfoldbutterflyx: Because you make me want to be as beautiful as the night sky.

To anyone else who reads this, let me know what you think. Did you like the descriptions?

StarryNight
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*ArthurCrow Jun 8, 2012  Professional Writer
This is a deeply beautiful weave of celestial magick and wonder.... it's like you have drank cosmic wine, and everything that is possible becomes your poetic ink. A masterful write! :)
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:iconinthestarrynightsky:
Thank you. :aww: I am glad my words could entice such a wonderful compliment.
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Mood: Love *PurpleInk777 May 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is beautiful! :w00t:

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Keep up the good work!! :iconyourocksonicplz:
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:iconinthestarrynightsky:
Thank you very much. :aww:
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*PurpleInk777 May 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:icon1stbutterflykiss: :iconrbyw: :icon1stbutterflykiss:
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I love this so much, the beautiful imagery and the tangible feeling of the night sky around your body. I love the feeling that you have it right in your grasp though its so evasive. :heart: Beautiful, I was listening to this while i read it :D [link] (im always listening to awesome music when I read your art :heart: )
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:iconinthestarrynightsky:
Thank you. I am glad that you like it. And the music sounds lovely. :aww:
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~YesterdaysWake May 21, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
This is just.. This is beautiful. If I could, I'd take a piece of a raincloud with me, this described my little obsession and plight for rain so perfectly.

When I was reading this, I got the feeling that the narrator was speaking of the universe as a star before it broke into the little core of the earth and wove layers upon layers of it.
This is so lovely. I am touched. Truly, truly touched.

You have such a gift. :heart:
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:iconinthestarrynightsky:
Thank you. :aww: If I could I'd give you that raincloud.

Fitting, I can see how you would get that image in your mind while reading this. Thank you.
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